This is a record of my learning during my time at Park Estate Primary School.
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Wednesday, 8 November 2017
Micah is unique
WALT: write about us being unique
I am learning to write about me being unique. When i was writing my personality and appearance it was hard but when i was writing my family it was easy.
Well done on diving in to your imagination to figure out what it is that makes you so unique. If I didn't know you, it would be easy for me to picture what you look like and how you dress because you're writing is descriptive. You're taller than the other kids, you wear jewellery, you're artistic and you even go on to describe your family very well. What a combination of hair colour too— dark brown, black, blonde and light brown. I'm curious though, what is it that makes you so funny?
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Kia Ora Micah,
ReplyDeleteWell done on diving in to your imagination to figure out what it is that makes you so unique. If I didn't know you, it would be easy for me to picture what you look like and how you dress because you're writing is descriptive. You're taller than the other kids, you wear jewellery, you're artistic and you even go on to describe your family very well. What a combination of hair colour too— dark brown, black, blonde and light brown.
I'm curious though, what is it that makes you so funny?
Ka pai kare!