IALT: use new writing skills independently
Firstly: I played the game of awesome
Secondly: I put together my cards and chose 5
Thirdly: I used those cards to write a story about them
I learnt that if you play a card game that has pictures on the cards you can write about your cards and show someone that you might think like it - Famliy
One thing that's hard is trying to make your story make sense because your using cards to help give you some idea's. Most of the things were easy because you just get the cards you have and you chose 5 and just write what they are.
This is my resource that i used to help me with this writing.
These were helpful for me cause without them I would be stuck with writing this story!
Come and read my blog and if you do please tell your friends or family to come and read it. If you liked it please comment on this blog and I will be great full that you liked it.
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Friday, 8 December 2017
WALT: use our new writing skills independently
Friday, 1 September 2017
IALT: use facts to support our ideas
IALT: use facts to support our ideas
First: i did my planed for our writing.
Second: i made it into sentences.
Third: I brainstormed about it.
I learned that it is easier when you plan before you write because if you don't plan before you write you will be struggling.
This is my brainstorm these are all words about plants and the environment.
Hope you have FUN reading my blog and that it is entertaining for you to read.
BLOG YOU LATER! :-p
Tuesday, 25 July 2017
IALT: Write a letter using a character description
IALT: Write a letter using a character description.
1. Tittle .
2. The steps i took.
3. what you learned.
4. what was easy / hard .
5. DLO.
6. Say something about the resource you used + add it.
7. Invite them to comment on something.
1. Tittle .
2. The steps i took.
3. what you learned.
4. what was easy / hard .
5. DLO.
6. Say something about the resource you used + add it.
7. Invite them to comment on something.
Tuesday, 27 June 2017
Kariotahi beach trip
beach trip
on tuesday we went to kariotahi beach it had black sand.We got a tour of the club. house and we saw the surf life boat.then We saw a really cool walkeytalkey after that we had morning tea and after that we got .changed and we walked down to the beach when we got to bulid a sand pit for ten min and after that. we played octopas and after that we went in to the water we got teached how to duck and dive and chube rescure and how to spot rip and how to be safe in the water after we went back to shore to have our lunch after that we got chaged then went back to the boat house the life guards told us a few more things and then we wait for the bus.
What i blogged
Learning blog
WALT: To blog about what i learn last week
Last week i learn new strategies to solve hard questions those strategies helped me finish 6 slides i was really happy that i could achieve 6 slides. When i finished my word problems i moved on to problem solving and i used those strategies to help me with this slide show. Then i moved to reading we are meant to read for 20 minutes i learn that reading for 20 minutes is really good for your brain and because your not just playing video games! And i learn that reading books you can learn new words and then find out what they mean then you can find some more words that you can learn.
After reading i moved on to writing. We got given a activity we had to fill in the missing words. We had to use a book or else we wouldn't know what the words i the gap's and that activity was called the Cloze activity.`
We also learn that every day we are learning on computers. I learn that it is called Digital learning Object.
We also learn that every day we are learning on computers. I learn that it is called Digital learning Object.
Thursday, 13 April 2017
My argument
WALT: To write an argument
I learn how to cheek my own work! And then we went back and read our writing and then edited it looked for spelling mistakes and making sure we had full stops and chapel letters.
I think it was easy and hard because we had to do lots of questions that were mixed up so the questions were hard then easy!
Next time i can add some more details!
Wednesday, 22 March 2017
Sunday, 12 March 2017
Beach trip
Kariotahi Beach Trip.
In the morning we went to school and then went to room 11 to sign in. After a while we went to the bus outside of school and waited for Sally to count us all up soon we got on the bus and it took around 40 minutes to get there. The name of the beach was Kariotahi.
When we got there we all got off the bus and lined up to go to the clubhouse, there was a patch of grass that we could sit and wait on. We were told instructions of what we had to do and where we were going. Then we had a tour of the clubhouse.
After that the girl’s went to get changed while the boys had morning tea and then the girls came out and the boys went in and got changed while the girls had morning tea. Then we went upstairs and sat down to get told more stuff about the water.
After that we were given some body boards and some life saving tubes.We put them down onto the soft sand.
After playing some games on the sand we made some sand castles my group made a fish.
After that we entered the water and did some duck diving, after that we got free time and that was so fun because I was just sitting in the water and the waves came in and they would push me back to the shore and when I bomb into the water it splashes in my face.
After some free time we got out and went back to the clubhouse to get changed. Then we got ready to go back to school on the bus and when we arrived back at school it was home time.
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